The truth is, all might be free if they valued freedom, and defended it as they ought.
Drafting the Declaration of Independence, Part II
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In May 1776, while Jefferson was in Philadelphia working on drafts of a constitution for Virginia —
new-modelling the form of Government — George Mason was in Williamsburg doing the same. He crafted his Declaration of Rights and wrote, with James Madison, a separate Virginia constitution.
On 12 June 1776 Mason’s Declaration of Rights was unanimously approved by the Fifth Virginia Convention with only a few changes. Two and a half weeks later, after five days of debate, the Constitution of Virginia was approved on 29 June 1776 — without Jefferson’s input. His constitution had arrived too late to affect the shape of the state government; only the preamble was used — tacked onto the beginning of the Constitution.
What is interesting about these events is the cross-pollination of ideas. Jefferson began work on the Declaration of Independence sometime after 11 June 1776 when the
Committee of Five (John Adams, Benjamin Franklin, Robert Livingston, Roger Sherman, and Jefferson) was appointed by Continental Congress to formally write-out an argument to notify Britain that the colonies were asserting their independence. In parallel, in Williamsburg on 12 June, the Declaration of Rights was passed by the Virginia Convention. Here is Section 1:
As his previous work towards a Virginia constitution attest, Jefferson was actively engaged in events back home. In fact, he had unsuccessfully tried to get himself released from Congress so he could attend the Virginia Convention. After all, at this point Virginia (like the other 12 colonies) was becoming its own little country, and that is where Jefferson hoped to make an impact.
So he certainly saw a copy of the Declaration of Rights, either before 12 June or after. This is what he wrote in his draft Declaration of Independence:
Note how neatly Jefferson uses the word
inalienable to replace Mason’s locution
when they [men] enter into a state of society, they cannot, by any compact, deprive or divest their posterity; and Jefferson uses the word
preservation as a perpetual loop around
life, & liberty, & the pursuit of happiness instead of the stand-alone right to
safety. And: Jefferson ignores the right of property — probably because it is not strictly inalienable.
The point here is that Jefferson did not write the Declaration out of whole cloth. He borrowed; improved.
Near the end of his life, recognizing what he had accomplished, and trying to explain it, Jefferson wrote to Richard Henry Lee (8 May 1825):